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Extra point assignment DUE MONDAY before class. You have the choice to turn in ONE well-written essay using the topics listed on your handout. The essay should be five paragraphs long (please look at the grading scale I sent you after I graded your assignments).
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ReplyDeletePeople shouldn’t be allowed to smoke in any public place.
We all know the damage that smoking causes to the human body. Therefore, should not be allowed smokers from smoking in public places because they pollute the air at other people. Smokers not only do harm to your health and can acquire many diseases but also they can damage health to others. In addition, cigarette smoke causes other inconvenience to people that are around as the smell that sticks to clothing and the skin itself.
First of all, people who do not smoke and are next to a smoker are called secondary smokers. According to investigations, they run the same risk of contracting respiratory diseases than a smoker. Allergies, asthma and the most important lung cancer are some of the diseases that can develop the smoker secondary. Allowing people smoking anywhere threatens the health of our children and all the people that despite not wanting to smoke can suffer from related diseases.
Moreover, many people do not like the smell of cigarettes and they being in places closed to clothes that smell nasty hits. For example, if there are people smoking in a restaurant or nightspots instead, in the moment to leave these places your clothes, your hair and your skin has that unpleasant smell of cigarette. The air conditioning in these places causes the odor gets more than they would outdoors. This odor can cause us headaches and dizziness in some cases.
Finally, it is important that smokers should not allow smoke in public places because smokers to not being able to smoke anywhere they smoke in less quantity. It has been shown that smokers be limited to their consumption of cigarettes, and which are to be moved to other locations where they are allowed. This is good both for the smoker and for the other people that are around him.
In conclusion, it is a good measure not allowing smokers from smoking in public places as they affect other people who are around you. The secondary smokers can experience the same respiratory diseases than smokers. The secondary smokers may be children who can develop allergies or asthma by cigarette smoke. Furthermore, it is unpleasant smell of cigarette smoke and finally is beneficial because it reduces the consumption of cigarettes in smokers. Therefore, smoking should not be allowed in public places.